What do you think of this letter I wrote to a Catholic boy who is getting ready for Confirmation?

Great, Skahh, but too way erudite for a youngster. I recall my confirmation at age 13, and although I was a bright kid I could not have understood the import of what you were striving to communicate here. At the time I was "just following orders." Shortly after being confirmed, I fainted during M--which told me that I was in the wrong place. Turned out to be true, of course. Blessings to you.