Emilia Desilets
Wednesday, December 14, 2011
Will you give me some feedback on this poem?
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this poem isn't bad, but I think that the stanzas should be the same size if they have a rhyming pattern and um there are some lines that don't really flow. I know your thinky wtf you couldn't write a better poem, but yeah. Sorry.
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